Wednesday, March 26, 2014

Overture

After months of stalling and indolence, when I finally created this blog and had a look at it, something was amiss. It was empty. It had the look of a just-opened Savings Account with zero balance. Hell, even banks demand 1000 bucks so as not to make your account look like a system error. Unless, of course, you are a student or NREGA worker or...hmm, too many exceptions! Damn you 'financial inclusion'. 

So I stopped looking at "No Posts" like a moron and started to think of something to make the first deposit. But, as most of us already know, words escape us when we need them then most. So I decided to go for the second best thing - time-tested & expedient; something which I regularly took recourse to during my college days (adding my name to an ever-expanding list which boasts of names ranging from Bollywood Musicians to Fareed Zakaria): Ctrl+C ---> Ctrl+V 

Here I am copy-pasting an inadvertent exchange of e-mails that I'd had with Mr. Shamshad Ahmed (ex-Foreign Secretary, Pakistan) around this time last year, when I was making my early forays in the domain of Writing, zealously commenting on various blog-posts and newspaper articles. It was during one such 'article-hunting' that I came across this. Now, usually I am content with replying on the site itself but there was something (which makes our cricket team beat Pakistan in a World Cup match even if it had lost to practically every other country, including Zimbabwe) about the origin of the post that made it incumbent upon me to drop a reply in the inbox of the author (you know, make it personal). So I rolled up my sleeves, asked for Sunny paaji's blessings, pictured Gadar's हैण्ड पंप उखाड़ने वाला सीन and started writing. It turned out to be this:

Sir,

I read your article "May you long live, Katju!" published in The Nation and would like to submit that some of your arguments do not stand up to close scrutiny, especially if done rationally and dispassionately.

" They have met at thousand points, on battlefields and at festivals, around market places and in homes. And yet, they have remained distinct and far apart. "

Personally I do not agree with this assertion. From whatever limited interaction I had with Muslims here, it never felt like they were 'distinct and far apart'. And I am quite sure that the feeling was mutual. I do agree that there might be insecurities festering due to various reasons, practical and historical (that's another debate), but that does not necessarily translate into being distinct and far apart. In fact, taking a liberal guess and extrapolating from my personal experience, I would assert that most of them are tied by community bonds.

"Nobody can deny this reality; otherwise, there would not have been two states carved out of India in 1947. "

Sir, your reality is your perception of history. My reality is formed by my perception of history which says that partition of India cannot be reduced to a simplistic notion of incompatibility of Hindus and Muslims. It was a culmination of sequence of complex historical events contrived by, in large part, British. That is what I realized after reading history books.

" In his view, at least 80 percent of the Indians, both Hindus and Muslims, were communal. Against this fractious scenario, how can he be so confident of a ‘reunification’ in the subcontinent? "

I think you missed the basic point of Mr. Katju here. Mr. Katju's 'reunification theory' presupposes a secular mindset of all (or at least of a large majority of) the residents of sub-continent. But as you rightly pointed out, that far from being the case, it doesn't look like happening in foreseeable future.

"That the Congress was a predominantly Hindu organisation was evident from the fact that at its inaugural session, out of 72 delegates only two were Muslims."

This is the point I most strongly disagree with. What you have presented here is a fact but in my humble opinion it doesn't represent reality. As history books would tell us, after mutiny of 1857, Hindus (especially upper caste) were quick to take up to modern secular English education which resulted in their development of political consciousness. Muslims were late to respond to demand of changing times due to various factors. Sir Syed Ahmed Khan did his best to spread modern secular education among Muslims but it did not lead to widespread penetration of modern education. This prevented the rise of political consciousness among Muslim masses. This, coupled with the fact that Muslims were a minority, could explain why there were only 2 Muslims delegates in inaugural session of congress against 72 Hindus. 

"As early as in the beginning of the 11th century, Al-Biruni had observed that Hindus differed from the Muslims in all manners and habits. Since then, despite living together for more than a thousand years, Hindus and Muslims continued to develop different cultures and traditions."
Lastly I would like to point out that this enmity between Hindus & Muslims is contrived and not a natural outcome stemming out of differences in culture/religion/social order etc. As you've rightly pointed out, despite all these differences, we had managed to live together for almost a thousand years. Then isn't it obvious that we would have continued to live together had it not been for the British conspiracy of dividing India? 

Over the years the problem has become much more complex due to various factors. I hope that people on both sides will try their best to  mitigate these factors and believe that it is possible to coexist peacefully. 


Thank You


Narender Kumar
New Delhi


Obviously, I wasn't expecting a reply. I mean who (that too as important as a senior diplomat of a big country) replies to an unsolicited email, even if full of diplomatic undertones. But reply he did. Turns out that he was sick of the responses on website in normal conversing styles (read uncouth references full of mother and sister adjectives) of deshbhakts and my formal manner was like a breather to him. It went like:

Dear Mr. Kumar,

I m delighted indeed to receive for a change a very-well articulated and historically-backed Indian point of view. I am mostly in agreement with you and respect even those elements of your viwpoint that I may disagree with. That is exactly the way civilised people engage in dialogue and exchange their viepoints. I have no problem with your vesion of history. But for a character like Katju, there was no other way to respond.

I advise you just go and visit the concerned website to see the language of the Indian (mostly Hindu) commnetators have used on my article and later on Katju's rejoinder. I can't even repeat that language here. It is nothing but filth, venom and poison. This is not the first time. It is a routine experience. Whenever there is any piece written by a Pakistani columnist with any reference to India or its policies, there are comments showing only a filthy and uncivilised mindset. We don't see this phenomenon in our youth here who despite the crazy fundamentalists in our society still hope for good relations between our two countries. There is some problem with the grooming of the younger Indian generation. I am not starting any new debate here but let me thank you for your very valuable comments that I greatly apprceiate for their well-meaningfulness and effective presentation. 

We should be focused more on how we can move away from history and rise above the old divides to build upon the commonalties that we do share. We must build bridges rather than destry them, and learn to live at peace with each other. Perhaps, one day, we might together even be a factor of regional peace and stability.  

God bless you.

Now even though I was too tempted to reply to sweeping generalisations like "some problem with the grooming of the younger Indian generation", I felt it would be stretching it too far. So I let it go. Besides writing another 500 word reply was too daunting a task for me. 

As I look back, I feel happy to have written it. And as I start my blogging journey as an amateur writer,and also being an IFS aspirant, it seems only fitting that this should become my first post.

13 comments:

  1. Well Done Mr. Kumar, God Bless you.. :)

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  2. Dude..m really impressed..gud going buddy..the e-mails u guyz xchanged realy made my day.. :-)

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  3. Congratulations on your first blog post. I have always admired your writing, be it in form of GS answers or elsewhere. This one too stands up to the expectations. However I had been, till before reading this, impressed that you actually had conversation with Pakistan's ex-foreign secretary. But his reply really disappoints me and shows his kindergarten anger and frustration at unsolicited comments he might be receiving from jingoistic readers. I can see why Pakistan is spiralling down a quagmire. Diplomats must be atleast diplomatic in their writings and should hardly sound revengeful and attention seekers. But nevertheless, good you let him taste the grooming of Indian youth and possibly future diplomat :). I think you would better do to add the links to his article and possibly the katju's.
    P.S.: The comment may sound patronising and was intended to :P, so as to encourage you to write more. Huh!

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    1. I was disappointed too by his reply. May be if he knew that I would made the exchange public one day, he would have chosen his words more carefully. And I think you missed the hyperlink created on "this". It was link to his article and Katju's article's link was on that page. So I thought interested reader could very well find it. I think rather than giving the link I should have briefly explained the contention between him & Katju, thereby saving the trouble of going through the article for the reader.
      Thanks for the feedback anyways..much appreciated :)

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  4. nice... as always.
    Felt as if I was reading Guha and Bhagat combined :)
    Waiting for the next post.

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    1. haha..ye jyada ho gaya but thanks for the kind words anyways :)

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    2. pehli blog entry pe hi sach bol dunga to tu agla kaise likhega :) :) :)

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  5. Letters from your pen has simply gone beyond the geographical boundaries defined in terms of squares and inches to touch the horizons of what is simply called as “Being Human”. For a moment while reading ur blog…your words could take me to a place where equality prevails n am no longer defined by my nation….but as simply “Me”…who is capable of equally loving and hating another individual despite caring for the community she/he belongs to…N dat is I guess a beginning to embrace acceptance.
    The blog seems to well articulate the topic of having secular minds. Just adding a pinch of Psychological perspective to it…I feel d moment person removes the label they were born with, "Product of the laws of Nature," and accepts any other label, thigz go crazy. They are automatically divided into "Us" and "Them." "Us" is always better than, "Them," so the conflict starts. We simply wear thick glasses of prejudice and see the world as has been portrayed by out society. Here would jus motivate you to step out From being u fr a moment….n c d situation. U’ll find itz craazzzyyly equivalent to the thinking of a small child who knowz dat world exist dichotomously as black n white, equivalent to Hindu n Muslims. U may laugh at the primitive thinking which v have nurtured for so long to maintain the fines lines of differences.
    Okay I think am way beyond expressing my views on ur blog…:p
    In short I truly Feel
    “Itz easy to walk on lines drawn by hatred but much love n happiness prevails when you rub the lines n embrace the goodness of each individual”

    What you have penned down is simply amazing. I mean you are among those few individuals who firstly have dat kind of Persona to get involved in issues beyond basics (reflective of the field u have chosen) n secondly have the artistic expression to articulate the thoughts beautifully in words. Moreover, an honest Salute to ur dare to express ur opinion to none other but Shamshad Ahmed d ex- foreign secretary of Pakistan n dat too on such a sensitive issue.

    Moreover, one very significant hidden msg ur blog conveys is that: One should never judge any other individual till they actually get to know them. Probably dis man’s opinion at one go lookz dammnnn communist but he seems to be less prejudices then he appears in his writing. Ignoring some remark on Indian Youth I really admire n definitely agree with his opinion on Building bridges of differences over commonalities n moving towards path of peace n brotherhoodness. C how well your comment could turn to be another stone in building a peaceful and secular nation. Commendable Job..!!!
    (Phool Mat jaana Zyaada Tareef sunkae..:P)
    Would motivate you to please go ahead with writing more such blogs.Share dis knowledge wid d world…

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    1. I am extremely grateful for the psychological perspective that you've added to the issue. But I think it would take a highly enlightened person to see himself as just "product of law of nature". So as things stand, sadly enough, we all our circumscribed by our prejudices and opinions. I believe our opinions aren't challenged enough in our day to day life. We mingle largely with a set of people with whom our opinions/world-views match, which I believe isn't healthy from a social point of view. This blog is an attempt in such a direction - to put my views out there and let them be challenged by as many people as possible.
      Thank you for the kind words and encouragement..means a great deal to me :)

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  6. What a great debut Mr. Kumar .... very well written ... eagerly awaiting the next one!!!!

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    1. bas ye debut kumar gaurav wale debut ki tarah na ho jaaye..isliye agla post likhne mein darr lag raha hai :P I think I should quit while people still think I can write well :D

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